We started a movie in class today. It was about the camps the Nazis put people in. What they did to people there was gruesome and horrible. I would never go to the ruins of that place. It would be too scary.
First, you need to write more. You can do that by expressing yourself in your writing more. I don't want a run-down of what you did in class; I know-I'm the one who planned it. Tell me what would be scary about visiting a concentration camp. That's the kind of "meat" I want to read in your blogs.
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First, you need to write more. You can do that by expressing yourself in your writing more. I don't want a run-down of what you did in class; I know-I'm the one who planned it. Tell me what would be scary about visiting a concentration camp. That's the kind of "meat" I want to read in your blogs.
Mrs. C
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